Opening Scene:
Setting: Johnny’s bed. It is roughly 2:00AM.
Length: 2 minutes
The camera will take a bird’s eye view shot of Johnny lying on his bed. As the camera gets closer his head moves slowly from left to right to signal some type of distress. At this moment, there will be a flash of a blood stained rope accompanied by snickering. The camera will capture the beads of sweat that begin to perspire on his face. Again, his head moves from side to side. The flash reappears, but this time it is a few seconds longer. The scene will switch from Johnny’s sweating face and the flashes of his nightmare. Each flash will become longer, revealing what he is actually dreaming of. The first flash was of a rope, the second flash is the extension of the same rope, and the third flash is a quick view of a person’s head. The fourth flash is an extended version of his nightmare. In this fourth flash an African-American man is hanging from a tree with the same rope that was shown in the beginning of the scene.
The camera shows an eye level wide shot of his body and then slowly zooms out, showing a crowd of people laughing. In the center of the frame, there is a small pale faced brown-eyed boy looking directly at the corpse. The camera zooms in on his face revealing his watering eyes. He takes a deep breath and looks at his father standing at his left side. The boy looks down in dismay, but quickly lifts his head up. The laughter fades, while a heart beat can be heard. The boy’s heartbeat increases as he looked back up to the corpse. The dead man’s eyes seemed to look directly at him. From this point, there are three flashes of the man’s eyes that alternate with Johnny sleeping in his bed. The camera gets closer to Johnny’s face, there is round of sweat around his pillow. The scene is now on the face of the corpse. After this frame, thunder is heard in the background. This sound wakes up Johnny gasping for oxygen.
END SCENE
Pivotal Scene:
Setting: Johnny’s house. It is approximately 6:00PM
Length: 5 minutes
This scene begins with Johnny inviting Georgia, for the first time, to his mansion. Johnny directs Georgia to the living room where they sit and have small talk. Johnny is wearing a business suit and Georgia is wear a blue printed dress. The lighting is mildly bright.
Johnny: That was a nice walk in the park. (Wide shot of both Johnny and Georgia)
Georgia: The sun was extremely high today. I’m surprised that not many people were out there.
Johnny: Yeah, I guess God wanted us to have the sky all to ourselves.
Georgia: I su’pose you right, Mr. Temple. This mighty fine house you got.
Johnny: It might be mighty fine, but it’s showl is lonely. (Looks around the house) I thought escapin’ my parents’ house, some of those horrible memories I have will go away. I guess life not like that.
Georgia: Naw, it’s not Mr. Temple. (laughs softly) May I use your restroom, Mr. Temple?
Johnny: You sure can, it’s down the hall pass the front door on the left. (He gives hand motions as he states the directions to the restroom.)
Richard and a few of his friends are walking up to the door. They are all wearing jeans and different colored shirts. The camera closes in on Richard as he turns the door knob. As the door opens he runs into Georgia.
Richard: Why is it a nigger woman in my brother’s house? Tell me nigger, (his voice gets louder) why you here? Came to steal something?
Johnny hears the commotion and flies into the scene.
Johnny: Richey, (he said in a smooth voice) what you doing here so early?
Richard: We came to have drink. And guess what I found lurking in ya house, a nigger.
Johnny hesitates. At this moment in the story, he does not feel confident telling his brother that he is in love with a black woman.
Johnny: Well, she’s the new maid. (Johnny’s heart dropped and his mouth went dry.) He felt Georgia’s angry glare on his face.
The camera gives a reaction shot and close up on Georgia’s slightly watering eyes.
Richard: Oh? Okay. He looks towards Georgia. Get me a beer.
Georgia sarcastically chuckles and walks towards the door. Before she could get two feet, Richard grabs her arm and holds her back.
Richard: The kitchen is that way nigger (pointing in the opposite direction).
Georgia: Get ya hands off me, Sir. (She said this with such a stern look.)
Richard slaps Georgia. Johnny is unable to hold himself back. He grabs his brother and back hands him. Starts to repeatedly hit his younger brother. The three friends backed away. They seem scared of Johnny in this randomly violet state.
Richard: What the hell are you doing? Johnny it’s me, Richey.
Johnny bursts into tears.
Johnny: I’m sorry. He sobs. He faces Georgia’s direction.
Richard is stunned.
Johnny: to Richard, Tell your boys get out of my house.
Richard: I can’t believe you a nigger lover.
Richard walks to the bottom of the stairs with his friends. He wipes his bloody face.
Richard: Daddy ain’t gone be too pleased about this, and he gone slit that nigger’s throat.
Johnny: Daddy just gone disown me. Ain’t nobody slitting nobody’s throat.
END SCENE